Draft #2
Sweetness,
Happy Valentine’s Day. I must say that as the day and years go by, my love for you only increases in intensity and depth. The music that our hearts sings last forever, rising to a crescendo of harmonies that shine for ever more in a universe of love we’ve created for ourselves in the ocean of peace and intimacy that can only be built on a beautiful foundation of understanding. I love you.

Comments:
On this version you might noticed I dropped the “I’m sorry”, while it’s always good to start with that on any written correspondence with your lady, I think that this metaphor heavy version says it all. I think I’m getting close. Video would be nice though.