Your Valentine Card: Why You Got What You Got

Draft #2
Sweetness,
Happy Valentine’s Day. I must say that as the day and years go by, my love for you only increases in intensity and depth. The music that our hearts sings last forever, rising to a crescendo of harmonies that shine for ever more in a universe of love we’ve created for ourselves in the ocean of peace and intimacy that can only be built on a beautiful foundation of understanding. I love you.

Comments:
On this version you might noticed I dropped the “I’m sorry”, while it’s always good to start with that on any written correspondence with your lady, I think that this metaphor heavy version says it all. I think I’m getting close. Video would be nice though.

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Comments

  1. Ann says

    Great funny piece – too bad you will not allow it to be posted to Facebook on Valentine’s Day that’s just stupid!!!!! Why not put your name out there and share your gift for funny….too bad so many people will never see this great piece …………..

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